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(1) I started playing football on a new team this year, our coach gave us a notebook with plays in it. (2) I looked at the pages, but I didn't understand anything. (3) The coach showed us the book and explained the drawings. (4) they were all X's, O's, and arrows. (5)When I looked at them, they just looked like someone had scribbled on the paper!
What is the best way to correct sentence 1?
(1) I started playing football on a new team this year, our coach gave us a notebook with plays in it. (2) I looked at the pages, but I didn't understand anything. (3) The coach showed us the book and explained the drawings. (4) they were all X's, O's, and arrows. (5)When I looked at them, they just looked like someone had scribbled on the paper!
What is the best way to correct sentence 1?
- I started playing football on a new team this year. Our coach gave us a notebook with plays in it.
- I started playing football on a new team this year: our coach gave us a notebook with plays in it.
- I started playing football. On a new team this year, our coach gave us a notebook with plays in it.
- I started playing football on a new team this year. our coach gave us a notebook with plays in it.