Writing Fiction Question
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Read the paragraph from a narrative. Then answer the question.
The boat pitched from side to side. The sky grew darker, and the wind howled eerily through the trees. I looked around the boat, frantically searching for the paddle. Suddenly, I told Aaron to look out on the water where the paddle was floating.
Which sentence could be improved by adding dialogue?
The boat pitched from side to side. The sky grew darker, and the wind howled eerily through the trees. I looked around the boat, frantically searching for the paddle. Suddenly, I told Aaron to look out on the water where the paddle was floating.
Which sentence could be improved by adding dialogue?
- “The boat pitched from side to side.”
- “The sky grew darker, and the wind howled eerily through the trees.”
- “I looked around the boat, frantically searching for the paddle.”
- “Suddenly, I told Aaron to look out on the water where the paddle was floating.”